This blog represents the official view of the voices in my head.





Saturday, November 19, 2005

Ajeeb shakhs

meri khataaon ki fehrist le kr aaya tha...
ajeeb shakhs tha apna hisaab chorr gaya

4 comments:

Gunjan said...

सामने लहराता समन्दर ,
मेरी ओर ,
कुछ फुसफुसाती नज़रों ,
से शिकायत कर रहा है !

कि क्युं नही,
मैं ,
उठ कर,
उसकी सलवटें साफ करता !

कि क्युं नहीं,
मैं,
एकदफ़ा सलीके से,
हिज़्र की यादें रूह से तकसीम कर देता !
ख्वामख्वाह-सा बैठा,
अपनी ख्वाबो-ख्याली में,
गुम क्युं हुं ?

क्या बुरा है ?
जो एक बेबाक से मंज़र पर,
कुछ शब्द जडे जाए,
कुछ फ़िकरे कसे जाए,
और ,
फ़कीरों की तरह,
जश्न मनाया जाये !

Gunjan said...

pasnad nahi aaya?
well aapka ek home page bhi tha...jiska link ab yahan nahi jismein dipti naval ki book ke bare mein jikr tha. wo kahan hai ..plzz give da link. :) i dint bookmark tht. tis no mistakes.
stay shining.

Pal said...

i cant read wht you have written in your earlier post....on my screen it looks like series of lines...may be it is diff kind of font...link to my website is http://candleinwind.tripod.com/
...yes Deepti Navals poems are for sensitive souls....specially "tell me i can fly" touched a cord.

Gunjan said...

okie it was in unicode...well..
here it goes::

Samney lehrata samandar,
meri or,
kuchh fusfusati nazron sey,
Shikayat kar raha hai !

Ki Kyu nahi ,
mai,
Uth kar ,
us ki salwatein saaf kartaa ?

Ki kyu nahi,
mai,
ek dafa slaeekey sey ,
hizr ki yaadein ruh se taksim kar deta ?

Khwam-khwaah sa baithaa,
apni khwabon-khayali mein,
Gum kyu hu ?

Kya bura hai ?
JO ek bebak sey manjar par,
kuchh shabd jade jaye,
kuchh fikre kase jaye,
aur,
fakiron ki terah ,
jashn manaya jaye !

:)